-Wow!.. I like your story. How can you remember all of your dreams??. You have very interesting stories, keep up the hard work.
-This is a very good story!..I would be scared to!. I am very curious to read the rest of your story!:)
-It sounds like you had a very interesting summer. I've never gone fishing but I would like to go someday. Keep up the hard work and I would like to read more of your stories!
-Your summer sounds fun. I like how you had a lot of detail in it!. You should write more stories.