Thursday, November 3, 2011

Commenting On Blogs

-Wow!.. I like your story. How can you remember all of your dreams??. You have very interesting stories, keep up the hard work.


http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/emilyl66/random-dreams/#comments


-This is a very good story!..I would be scared to!. I am very curious to read the rest of your story!:)


http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/AdrianF4/not-a-nightmare-anymore-2/


-It sounds like you had a very interesting summer. I've never gone fishing but I would like to go someday. Keep up the hard work and I would like to read more of your stories!


http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/AshleyS51/my-summer-2/
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-Your summer sounds fun. I like how you had a lot of detail in it!. You should write more stories.


http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/samik2/my-summer-6/#comments

1 comment:

  1. Really good job on expressing what your characters were doing, how they felt, what happened to them, and leaving a "cliff hanger" at the end! That was genius!! I loved it! Keep it up!!

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