Thursday, November 3, 2011

Commenting On Blogs

-Wow!.. I like your story. How can you remember all of your dreams??. You have very interesting stories, keep up the hard work.

-This is a very good story!..I would be scared to!. I am very curious to read the rest of your story!:)

-It sounds like you had a very interesting summer. I've never gone fishing but I would like to go someday. Keep up the hard work and I would like to read more of your stories!

-Your summer sounds fun. I like how you had a lot of detail in it!. You should write more stories.

1 comment:

  1. Really good job on expressing what your characters were doing, how they felt, what happened to them, and leaving a "cliff hanger" at the end! That was genius!! I loved it! Keep it up!!