Friday, October 21, 2011

My Story

Sergio, Cesar, Yengshi and Alex



One day there was four boys named Sergio, Cesar, Yengshi and Alex. It was Halloween night and Alex yelled out to them "Let's go to a Haunted house!!". And they all agreed to go. So when they got their they were a little bit scared but they got over it. Yengshi and Alex went in first while Cesar and Sergio and waited outside. The two boys that were waiting outside starting laughing because they heard the other boys screaming. When It was their turn Cesar was scared and Sergio told him "Common man stop being a little baby Its not that scary!" and Cesar told him "Man I ain't scared im just cold". "Yea whatever common hurry up or were going to get left behind". At the end of the trail all the people that went in came out but the only ones that didn't come out were Cesar and Sergio. Then Yengshi said "Hey Alex wheres Cesar and Sergio" "I don't know man they were suppose to come out with everybody else", said Alex. So they went to tell the security guys and they said "We don't know boys everybody that went in came out all together maybe they are pulling tricks on you guys!". "No I don't think so cause they would of already came out minutes age",said Yengshi. "Yea I agree" said Alex. The next day the two boys went to investigate and see where Cesar and Sergio went. They never found them again. They were guessing that they were dead because they never found their bodies.              
                                   (Three Months Later)


Haunted House
      It was three months later and they still couldn't find them so they decided to go look for them one more time. They looked for them but they still couldn't find them . The next day they went out to look for them again and while they were in the car they saw two boys walking down the street so they decided to see if they were Cesar and Sergio. When they turned around to check they noticed that it was them so they hurried up and told them to get in the car. When they got home Yengshi said "Where were you guys its been three months and you guys were disappeared!". "We were kidnapped by two guys", said Sergio. "To be honest I was really scared!!", said Cesar. "Oh well did you guys get to see their faces?", asked Alex. "Nahh we didn't have time it happened to fast", they replied. Oh well as long as your good everything will be ok , the others replied.  Well we have to investigate to see who it might of been. So they all agreed to go report it to the polices. The cops asked them how long has it been since its happened and they replied saying "Its been three months already". The officers replied and said "Sorry kiddos but its already been a long time and the guys who kidnapped you guys might of already left the city, but well try to do something". "Okay but if you find out about something give us a call", they replied. Ever since then nobody knew about anything so they just forgot about everything. 

                                        THE END!

3 comments:

  1. HI MY NAME IS VICKI NELSON I AM CURRENTLY GOING TO THE UNIVERSITY OF SOUTH ALABAMA.AND YOUR STORY IS VERY INTERESTING. ARE YOU SCARED OF CEMETERIES. I WOULD NEVER GO THREW A CEMETERY IN THE DARK EVER CAUSE I AM SCARED OF THEM. I GUESS IT IS CAUSE I WATCHED ALL THOSE SCARY MOVIES WHEN I WAS YOUNG. WHEN YOU WROTE THIS STORY HAD YOU WATCHED A MOVIE OR JUST READ A SCARY BOOK. IS THAT WHAT BROUGHT IT TO YOUR ATTENTION. WELL IT WAS VERY NICE TALKING TO YOU. KEEP WRITING IT BRIGHTENS YOUR MIND.

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  2. Hi Karla,
    My name is KaShondra Rudolph. I am an EDM310 student from the University of South Alabama. I am studying to be and Elementary Education teacher. What a scary story you wrote. I would have not wanted to be one of those two girls. I think I would have cried for my mother. Great story!!! Keep up the good work.

    KaShondra Rudolph

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  3. I liked it. so what happen to Alex and Yengshi did they find them. Keep it up girlfriend you are awesome at writing scary story

    Jesus
    http://noeljesus.blogspot.com/

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